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27th Mar 2014, 10:43 AM in Chapter 3: "A Lone Wolf"
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27th Mar 2014, 10:43 AM
Alicia
So my sick daughter is home from school today watching Sesame Street while I'm drawing a decapitated wolf head... Elmo, I will never hear your laugh the same way again. 0_0

There's some wonderful new fan art this week! And one tiny bonus art thingy I did for a drawing challenge.

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27th Mar 2014, 10:46 AM
HolyLancer
Oh, man, that's a great story. XD Well, sorry your daughter is sick. That's not too much fun. 3:

Anyway...awesome job on the backgrounds here....I love the bottom panel!
27th Mar 2014, 11:37 AM
jas
jas
That is a funny story. Elmo's a mess anyway (is that a pun, given the story?). I hope your daughter's better soon.

And this is a very nice page. I like that you got back to Takoda. I was starting to wonder. :) Do not make this man mad, that seems to be the moral to the story here.
27th Mar 2014, 12:19 PM
Jarvi
Sesame Street and decapitated head... nice mix :P
27th Mar 2014, 12:57 PM
alston123
I hope your daughter feels better. I can't wait for the next page!!! :D
27th Mar 2014, 2:33 PM
Matt Knab
Haha, great story!
Great page, especially like how you break out of the panels for 3 and 4. Takoda certainly isn't taking any chances with this one!
One small criticism, however: the way Takoda is flipping the werewolf in panel 1 doesn't seem to match the way it hits the tree in panel 2 - I would have guessed it would hit either head first or upside down, depending on momentum and how far away the tree was.
27th Mar 2014, 2:52 PM
HapyCow
Awesome!! :D I knew Takoda was a bad ass. Aw I wish the gang was all back together so they could kill werewolves as a team!
27th Mar 2014, 3:03 PM
TheD-Wrek
You draw action sequences just fine. As a matter of fact it looks great! :3
27th Mar 2014, 3:09 PM
LeRenardRoux
lol Alicia! >.< Elmo has always creeped me out since those burning Tickle-me Elmo dolls.

And yeah, remind me not to get on Takoda's bad side.
28th Mar 2014, 8:17 AM
Alicia
Thanks for the get well wishes for my daughter, guys! She's been running a pretty bad fever and cough, but I think today things are starting to look up a bit.

It is actually hard to make Takoda mad, unless you are a werewolf. He has his reasons.

@Matt Knab: Yep, I totally realize I messed that up pretty bad after you mentioned it. That werewolf should be upside down in that panel where he hits the tree. My bad. (I might go back and fix it later...) Thanks for the feedback! I wasn't sure if the "blood panel" was going to be a good thing or not.

@HapyCow: In just a couple of pages, we will be checking back in with the rest of the team. Unfortunately they won't be reunited until the next chapter, but some interesting stuff is going to be revealed between now and then. :)

@TheD-Wrek: I struggle with character stiffness and awareness of space, so action scenes are the BANE of my existence. >_< But I'm glad ya like it and thanks. :)

@LeRenardRoux: Oh, man! I remember that video now! Ugh, let the Elmo nightmares begin... x.x
28th Mar 2014, 1:02 PM
HolyLancer
As far as panel 2 goes, you could probably easily just flip the whole panel, and then flip the sound effects around.

I didn't even realize it wasn't quite right at first!
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