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31st Jan 2013, 2:06 AM in Chapter 1: "The Nightriders"
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Author Notes:

31st Jan 2013, 2:06 AM
Alicia
Rated M for Mature. O_o;

Comments:

31st Jan 2013, 2:15 AM
DustyMuffinsss
Magnificent
7th Feb 2013, 10:43 AM
Kristy
Ooh, lovely job so far! Love the linework. :D

I guess this starts things off... with a... bang. Ohohohohohohoho I'm going now.
7th Feb 2013, 3:00 PM
Alicia
lol XD Just l.o.l.
2nd May 2013, 12:38 PM
Shaggers
Violence! Woo! I'm liking it already.
2nd May 2013, 8:57 PM
Alicia
Thanks! My goal with this comic is to keep the AMOUNT of violence to a minimum but keep the QUALITY of the violence high. That is also one of the strangest things I've ever said.
1st Jun 2013, 12:01 AM
ranger_brianna_new
Nope, not at all. It's perfectly normal and it's a hugely respectable decision.
5th Feb 2014, 7:17 AM
Jarvi
Quality of violence... sound like a nice psycho :D
2nd Mar 2014, 10:33 AM
alston123
Nice! Someone is already nailed only four pages in! I think I'll like this. ;)
2nd Mar 2014, 4:21 PM
Alicia
I hope you do! Old West + werewolves = shootouts at night. ;)
20th Apr 2014, 8:05 AM
I know it's quite late in the game to display such pedantry, but shouldn't the blood spurt be on the other side of her head? That's an exit wound sort of effect.

Apart from that...intrigue and excitement abounds! Rarely does one see a comic that grabs a reader so resoundingly within the first four pages. Now I just need to rush to catch up in time for the Nexus launch.
20th Apr 2014, 9:05 AM
Alicia
In real life, there probably wouldn't be any blood coming from the entrance of the wound. I actually made it this way at first but then it looked strange to me so I added blood to the other side as well. There are so many technical errors in this comic, especially concerning action scenes which I always struggle with. x_x

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. ^_^
23rd Aug 2014, 2:52 PM
Thing is, it looks like the bullet entered the right side of her head and exited the left. Subsequent frames, however, says the bullet should have gone the other way.

Interesting comic so far. Reminds me a little of the Deadlands game I was in recently (though they had a WHOLE lot more than just werewolves going on). That one started on a train, too. :-)
23rd Aug 2014, 3:35 PM
Alicia
Yes, the bullet entered her right side and exited left side. The wound you see in the panel afterwards is the exit wound. Sorry for the confusion! I have to go and make things unnecessarily complicated like that. x_x

Thanks! I don't know what Deadlands is, but that sounds cool! ^.^
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