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12th May 2017, 9:26 AM in Chapter 8: "The Calling"
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12th May 2017, 9:26 AM
Alicia
Just the pencils today, which I thought might be better than nothing. T_T I'm sorry I always seem to be behind each week... Things need to SLOW THE HECK DOWN so I can make comics properly, dangit!

Anyway, thanks for your patience! <3 I DON'T DESERVE YOU ALL! ;__;

EDIT: Aaaaand finished! \o/

Comments:

12th May 2017, 9:32 AM
Zor15
Its okay take your time.
25th May 2017, 10:33 AM
Alicia
Thank you for understanding! <3
12th May 2017, 9:33 AM
HeSerpenty
SH SH yes you do deserve us all! *says the person who can't be on time to save her life lately* X"D

*cough* uh anyway :'D...

OH MAN Annabelle you be careful girl! You don't want to mess with Abraham :'D
He's not gonna be too thrilled with her here ina sec..........and Jeriah is outta commission to help!

PS I love Theo with the attitude <333
25th May 2017, 10:34 AM
Alicia
Yeah, dunno if it was me in that situation if I woulda went for the crystal just then. Seems risky. :o
12th May 2017, 3:44 PM
Is it weird that I subconsciously read Theo's lines with the voice of the Medic from TF2? He does looks suspiciously Medic-inspired. XD
25th May 2017, 10:35 AM
Alicia
I don't even know what the Medic in TF2 sounds like. Gonna go look that up right now! lol
12th May 2017, 9:57 PM
It's completely fine! I really like reading it this way too! It gives more feel I dunno lol
19th May 2017, 3:41 PM
Heh, now I really want to see some art of each of the characters as a TF2 character. Theodore would obviously be the medic, Carson could be the Sniper, Annabelle would probably be the scout, Jeriah would have to be the heavy (Because sandviches), Scarlett could be the pyro (fiery temper), Takoda could be the soldier, Abraham could be either the engineer or the demo (or some crazy mix of both?) and the spy.........well, I have no clue, but if someone is a spy, we'll shortly find out. XD
19th May 2017, 3:44 PM
Just realized I missed the perfect opportunity to make Jeriah a heavy/spy combo. He is basically on the opposite team right now, but probably not for long, I'm guessing. He's the true spy, definitely.
25th May 2017, 10:35 AM
Alicia
Thanks, ScarletFox! Yeah, for consistency I am gonna keep inks for Silver (that and inking looks good when it's a black and white comic) but for my next comic, I'm gonna stick with those clean pencils instead, since it will be in color and be softer. :D

And yeah, I gotta look all of this Team Fortress stuff up so I can see what you mean about all of this. XD
12th May 2017, 11:03 PM
Kattapuss
Woooow your pencil sketches are so pretty and clean *-*
Mine are always a mess everywhere x'D How do you do it???
25th May 2017, 10:37 AM
Alicia
Thanks! I don't know, to be honest. They've just always turned out this way. I think it's because I draw really lightly in my sketch phase? *Shrug.*
13th May 2017, 1:28 AM
junoro
Your lines are so incredibly clean, whether pencil or inked, so don't worry about it!

Also ANNABELLE SNEAK ATTACK
25th May 2017, 10:38 AM
Alicia
Thanks! And yus! Hopefully sneak attack remains sneaky and not "I just got caught" attack. XD
19th May 2017, 3:02 AM
Wasn't I just mentioning liking being able to see Theo's eyes? And here we are, two whole panels of it! And it isn't even my birthday or Christmas or anything. XD

Abraham's like a dog that got into the people dinner. He needs to be spritzed with water and put outside for a while with stern words to keep him from doing it again. Bad Abraham! Theodore didn't make that serum for you!

....I've decided I don't want to know what he considers proper motivation, I can think of several possibilities and none of them are pleasant. It's just as well that it doesn't matter; he's not going to get a chance to implement whatever it is he's thinking about doing. Which is, I suspect, a VERY good thing for all parties involved.

I love that the crystal necklace is around his middle finger, because of course I do. It's very fitting. Annabelle might not be body slamming him, but she's brave enough to go for it, and I'm proud of her. :] I will say this is one page where lack of backgrounds kind of hurts things - Jeriah seems to have vanished, and while I think it's because Abraham moved to confront Theodore and just left him behind (way to go, Abe -_-), it threw me for a second. Other than that, very, very easy page to read, and of course I am thoroughly in love with those first two panels. XD

Now, I personally like seeing your pencils. I think they look lovely and I like seeing a progression from that to the final product. However! There's art stuff about this page that you just don't have in the pencils, like the lighting on Abraham's hand because the crystal is glowing. I really love that, for whatever reason. I think it's excellently done and it just looks cool. And of course, the full black bits always look a bit barren without the black. Abraham's eyepatch was not meant to be white, methinks. XD

Still, it's neat to see. You can't get such a good final product without a good base, and it's nice to see that base every now and then. That being said, your shading and use of ink really makes the world pop.
25th May 2017, 10:42 AM
Alicia
Ha ha, I was thinking of you when I drew Theodore in his own little panel over there. He needed some intense hatred in his face, including in those eyes.

And yeah, I am waaaay too lazy about backgrounds. To be honest, I attempted to put some in a few panels here and it just looked strange to me (like I probably didn't draw them properly to compliment the characters or something) so I ended up erasing them. X'D I really need to learn how to draw environments better. x_x

Yeah, because Silver is black and white, it is MEANT to be inked. When I start up my next comic, I am gonna be SO GLAD to do away with those heavy, black lines though. I will not miss them. lol
20th May 2017, 1:26 AM
Gladewalker
Well, it seems I've caught up with the latest page. I must say so far I've loved every single one! But this also means I have to wait for the next ones XD

I guess the eye patch really works wonders. I can see why Annabelle took the opportunity XD
25th May 2017, 10:43 AM
Alicia
Yay! Thank you for reading!

Ha ha yeah... I can imagine Abraham's peripheral vision isn't exactly the greatest on that side of his face. XD
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