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Comic 154 - Page 134

14th May 2015, 11:59 AM in Chapter 5: "Surviving Defeat"
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Author Notes:

14th May 2015, 11:59 AM
... D':


14th May 2015, 12:17 PM
Alicia, why you gotta shatter my poor kokoro like that D,:

On a different note, it's hilariously off-putting when your author's note is a teary face and your avatar is this:
14th May 2015, 1:46 PM
Omigosh Cici that is exactly what I thought XDDD

But yeah seriously Alicia, wryyyy D:
14th May 2015, 7:11 PM

Now every time, no matter what I type, my true feelings shall be known. >_> (FYI I am making that face all of the time in RL. I am not sure how Shark knew that.)
14th May 2015, 12:56 PM
nuuuuhhuuhu Jeriah :'(
14th May 2015, 7:11 PM
He'll... uh... get over it?

Then again, since he's thinking about this right now, probably not. X'D
14th May 2015, 12:59 PM
What a HORRIBLE thing for these poor babies to see!!! T___T!!! Man that bottom panel pulls at my heart strings. ... and rips them right out! Aw man I wouldn't take that sight well if it were me Q__Q
14th May 2015, 7:12 PM
At least Clara was strong enough to step up and take care of Jeriah despite all of this, right?

ohwaityeahshediestoothat'sright. >_________>;
14th May 2015, 7:36 PM
LOL Alicia you troll, you!! x'DDDD

14th May 2015, 1:03 PM
Q__Q I'm so sorry for them.

And lovely use of negative space on this page Alicia!
14th May 2015, 7:13 PM
Thanks! Yeah, I think keeping it minimal like this helped get the feeling across a little better, so I decided to keep it that way. (orI'mincrediblylazytellnoone >_>)
14th May 2015, 2:44 PM
Well, it was less horrific of a sight than what I was thinking, but still for young kids to see their parents like that...
14th May 2015, 7:15 PM
Yeah, when dealing with death scenes in comics, I give the 'good guys' the less dramatic versions of death.

But for the villains? XD See page 4. lol
14th May 2015, 3:07 PM
Matt Knab
There, there. You'll grow up to be perfectly normal and emotionally well-adjusted. >.>
14th May 2015, 7:15 PM
LOL Obviously. X'D
14th May 2015, 3:47 PM
Omg this is terrible, poor jeriah!! Alicia whhhyyyyyyy...he has a tragic backstory and a terrible curse and now his father figure just died so he feels like extra miserable....@_@ at this point it might be even more cruel of you to keep him alive, haha
14th May 2015, 7:16 PM
Aw, yeah but things are BOUND to get better for him soon right? XD

Riiiiiiiiight? <____<;
14th May 2015, 4:37 PM
D: D: D:

But yes, I feared exactly this..
14th May 2015, 7:17 PM
It's one of those parts of the story that everyone pretty much knew about but I still wanted to show how it impacted them, ya know? :')
15th May 2015, 2:16 PM
..and one of those parts where we know, but still somehow cling to the hope that we are wrong...
14th May 2015, 6:25 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I was way off!! Lets go back to the other idea with the dancing penguins and the Jesus toast! QAQ no wonder he never smiles..(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ
14th May 2015, 7:18 PM
I took away all of his reasons to smile.

All. Of. Them.
14th May 2015, 8:18 PM
Oh goodness. Man, I knew this was coming, but I am not prepared. :(
And Alicia, I vote that we have a support/ grief group for those who are struggling with Takoda's death. Heck, since Jeriah's perents are dead too, why don't we just extend it to all of the deceased characters of Silver? :P :3 -_-
14th May 2015, 10:47 PM

Let's see... *Counts on fingers.* Um... I think there are more dead characters in my comic than there are live ones at this point? X'D Oops!
15th May 2015, 12:50 PM
No. no. no. no. no. no. nope. no.
<closes the page and forgets>

I wonder why there was no Silver page this week.. hmmm....
15th May 2015, 12:54 PM

Yeah, strange! I coulda swore that I promised there would be an extra sad page this week... X'D
16th May 2015, 11:10 AM
Slim Kittens
It's not nearly as bad as I was expecting, but I guess you wanted Jeriah to remain sane for the story.
17th May 2015, 11:40 AM
Well, yeah. Mostly that. XD

That and you can't really see the damage to his parents since it is mostly on the chest/throat. If I were to turn those guys over and zoom in, it woulda been nasty. >_>
19th May 2015, 1:51 PM
D: Poor Jeriah... he can't catch a break at all. And to think only more death is coming.

Really nice job on the expressions here. Seriously though, your avatar juxtaposition with the D:... is uncanny. I SEE THROUGH YOUR RUSE.
20th May 2015, 8:02 AM
Thanks! Yus... My avatar always gives away my true feelings. I DENY NOTHING AND EVERYTHING.
19th May 2015, 2:51 PM
C'mon Jeremiah. Quit over reacting!
20th May 2015, 8:03 AM
No crying allowed! Even over the death of your parents! GEEZ. lol
25th Aug 2015, 2:49 AM
Hey there, I recently found your comic and really enjoy it, but I feel you make a mistake here...
Putting "waaah" behind newly orphaned children really diminishes their grief.. I know this is a comic and maybe you were trying to keep it light -- but it IS a death scene and by putting that word behind them you shatter what would otherwise have been a powerful moment.

"Waah" is just too silly of a word for this.
25th Aug 2015, 9:49 AM
Oh! Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it! I really like setting up powerful moods, so I would definitely like it if something seems off for someone to tell me.

Do you think I should just take out the sound effect all together? Or is there a better one I should try?
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