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21st Feb 2013, 10:31 AM in Chapter 1: "The Nightriders"
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21st Feb 2013, 11:17 AM
rufiangel
Love the art - what strong and bold lines! :D Story's super fast-paced from the get go, like it!
21st Feb 2013, 3:56 PM
Alicia
Thanks! I think that too often writers try to set up and explain their universe/characters first when really it is more fun to explain things through action and let the readers discover these things for themselves.
5th Feb 2014, 7:18 AM
Jarvi
I like this guys outfit :)
5th Feb 2014, 10:01 AM
Alicia
Thanks!

...I've had my regrets since it became his final design, but I guess I should just finally accept it.
16th Mar 2014, 12:19 AM
Good choice on the scant dialogue. I see a lot of webcomics that are overwhelmed with text bubbles. Plus, it draws out the suspense of the scene!
16th Mar 2014, 8:08 AM
Alicia
Thank you!

Yes, that is one thing I am very careful about. If a reader doesn't get hung up reading a bunch of text, then the story flows more smoothly, I feel. :)
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